Muelsfell: Rise of the Golems - Fantasy Browser Games by Necrotales Games

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Message #42350 Posted: Feb 23, 2010, 4:26 pm

Since I'm utterly exhausted from offline bullshit and need something to take my mind off it-

The Official Discussion Thread for the Fate ReVersed fanfic series

(which can be read here) [/muelsfell/Fanfiction.php]

Likes? Dislikes? Comments? Criticism?

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Message #42399 Posted: Feb 24, 2010, 9:39 pm

i think it would make a great paper back book.
however due to faulty internet i cant read a lot of it at a time but can still use word is there any chance of there being all of them chapteres and books as an all text document for download?
also your images for the advertiseing look a lot like gaiaonline.com just a thought though

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Message #42418 Posted: Feb 25, 2010, 6:49 am

I'm no artist, so I used the tektek.org "Gaia Dream Avatar Creator" to make the char pics >.> so that would be why.

As for a down-loadable version - there isn't one as of yet, but it'd take me all of twenty minutes to whip one up, so when I get a minute I'll make some for ya. PDF okay?

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Message #42443 Posted: Feb 25, 2010, 8:52 pm

yeah i only have a few minetes online but i really like it .

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Message #42524 Posted: Mar 2, 2010, 1:07 am

Your World in PDF form [/muelsfell/fanfiction/YourWorld.pdf]

Dark Jewels [/muelsfell/fanfiction/DarkJewels.pdf]

When we finish Midnight Voices I'll pdf it as well as releasing a final omnibus edition

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Message #42585 Posted: Mar 4, 2010, 9:00 pm

As you already know Yami, I definitely enjoyed it. Definitely recommended.

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Message #42600 Posted: Mar 5, 2010, 6:27 pm

thank you so much this is one really great piece of work.

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Message #42640 Posted: Mar 6, 2010, 3:34 am

I didn't realize there was a thread, but as you know I quite enjoyed it, I still have a couple chapters to read, but very good.

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Message #42751 Posted: Mar 12, 2010, 9:33 pm

very excellent i would pay to see this as a play/movie/TV show
what ever happens first

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Message #42786 Posted: Mar 15, 2010, 3:00 am

It would probably work very nicely as an online comic... what a novel idea! (lol sarcasm) But ya it would work really well in another medium besides text(not that text is bad thing don't get me wrong). It would also be cool it you also integrated other world characters (with there permissions of course) but eh, your story ;).

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Message #42807 Posted: Mar 16, 2010, 4:53 am

The issue with adaptation to a webcomic is neither of us can draw XD

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Message #42809 Posted: Mar 16, 2010, 5:19 am

As for bringing in other characters... we have done so, in a way. The 'Kaelas' character is one of my favorites so he's been imported into a lot of different settings, sometimes as an alternate version of himself, sometimes as the original Kaelas at different times in his life.

As of now, he's been in a futuristic Speed Racer parody as an AI program, as himself in a Harry Dresden/Buffy the Vampire setting (but official characters from both are there only as cameos), and as himself in the Faeurn campaign setting (D&D). He's also in some home-brew settings.

As for Yamiko, she's only been in Muels RP, FateReVersed and a BESM game that Yamikurone runs with a few friends.

Haven't really thought about bringing in other setting's characters into FRV... could be interesting but certainly not until the third book is done, at least. Last thing our poor characters need right now is more complications!

EDIT: As for the idea of a webcomic... I pointed out that we could do a sprite comic and was promptly smacked upside the head. Which I deserved, considering how poorly that particular medium would fit the feel of the setting.

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Message #42818 Posted: Mar 16, 2010, 6:04 pm

Oh whoops I meant Muelfell characters (Brain thinks one thing then types another XP) There's plenty of characters that have been created that would add to your stories, and having some other Golem related magi might help cement that it happens (at least partly) in Muelsfell.

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Message #42847 Posted: Mar 17, 2010, 9:11 pm

But it doesn't happen in Muelsfell. It happens in the world of Black Jewels, by introducing the primary concept of Muelsfell - the golemancy - to an established universe. There isn't enough setting information to really write something occurring in the Realms yet - I've thought about it, and I'd like to write something, but almost everything established about the world is fan-established and thus subject to change.

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Message #42858 Posted: Mar 18, 2010, 2:19 am

oh okay, well don't really know what to say then, other then keep going.

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Message #42863 Posted: Mar 18, 2010, 3:47 am

Thanks for the compliments!

And we are still working on it but we've gotten a little bogged down due to midterms, illness and some finicky scenes that we have to work our way through...

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Message #43041 Posted: Mar 25, 2010, 8:22 pm

i think FateReVersed could be a good prequel to a really great series. IMO

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Message #43044 Posted: Mar 25, 2010, 9:24 pm

.... prequel? It's three (albeit short) books long XD

But yes, we are planning a sequel.

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Message #43228 Posted: Apr 5, 2010, 4:46 am

Chapter 2 of midnight voices is up; chapter 3 is half-written, there was just a stubborn scene in 2 that refused to come out right.

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Message #43599 Posted: Apr 13, 2010, 7:17 am

Chapter three is up now, out of a planned six.

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Message #43700 Posted: Apr 16, 2010, 12:42 am

Yamikuronue said:

.... prequel? It's three (albeit short) books long XD

But yes, we are planning a sequel.

Well what i mean is this could set up a great opening for when they have kids and go off on an adventure. With Viktor(not sure about the golems name (the one that goes on a rampage and almost kills Kaelas.))as the main antagonist and either yami and Kaelas go off to stop him or this could be years later (yami could have aged OR could be slightly older mid 35-40 and then during the story she finds an amulet that prevents aging etc...)or their kids find that yami is kidnapped and kaelas could be killed or deathly ill.

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Message #43704 Posted: Apr 16, 2010, 1:51 am

Interesting ideas. We've actually got plans for the next book - and it will revolve around the next generation - but poor Viktor deserves a break, don't you think?

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Message #43706 Posted: Apr 16, 2010, 2:14 am

well a few speculations first due to the fact that viktor is practically turning human/blood/Magus you decide he has kids and they half Blood/Golem they attempt so Craft but have their minds twisted and distorted to evil and Kaelas Yami and Viktor goes to find a cure for their madness and along the way they meet the locals and make many friends.

or Kaelas suddenly falls deathly ill (or yami)
then Yami or whomever is not sick goes out to find the cure. i say yami due to the fact that one she is not a master at craft and two this will allow her to explore the world and learn.

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Message #44159 Posted: May 1, 2010, 5:26 am

So we're working on chapter four, and I need to know how I'm doing so far in one area - what do you guys think of the new character, Sapphira? Everyone else we have a firm grip on as far as characterization, but I'm not sure I'm writing her well to get across what I wanted.