Author | Thread: Just some Misinformation/Typo (I think...) |
Ezekiah Posts: 128 Location: Last Alvia Dawning Magus Age: 128 years old
| Message #5972 Posted: Jul 3, 2008, 4:06 am |
"The Sovereign Magistratecan pick an item from those available in the the Library, which then allows the clan to create that item in the Armoury as long as the clan has enough resources to do so. Once a slot has been used to choose a particular item, it can not be changed." However, from what I gather Archdukes/duchesses can also choose items yes? So shouldn't it say something more to that effect? Sorry if this is nit-picky |
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[ADMIN] ArkhamPosts: 902 Location: Mallow Magus Age: 130 years old Clan: AGOMC | Message #6001 Posted: Jul 3, 2008, 5:12 pm |
Nah, not nit-picky at all. :) I've changed it to: "High rank members of the clan such as the Sovereign Magistrate can pick an item from those available in the the Library..." Kep |
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StarSecrets Posts: 146 Location: Ogsden Magus Age: 118 years old
| Message #6047 Posted: Jul 4, 2008, 6:04 am |
Along the same (if not more) nit-picky lines; Since it is only possible to sell one of an item at a time, is there really a reason to have the market say, for example "one leather straps?" Could it not be instead merely "Leather straps" or something like "One set of leather straps?" After all, for the most part, I think, you have things pluralized if they're plural and singular if there's only one, so this bothers me- things like this might as well be consistent throughout. Thank you. |
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Ezekiah Posts: 128 Location: Last Alvia Dawning Magus Age: 128 years old
| Message #6323 Posted: Jul 8, 2008, 2:47 am |
another little "not nit-picky" typo: For the Death Scavenger Beetle (in a Cairnfields) "Some researches feel that the corrupting...." should be "researchers" |
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